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Future Regrets of the Past by ~will-bob:iconwill-bob:



The sun shines through the rustling leaves
Throwing shadows around the stream
A man sits lonely pondering his lost dreams
A man sits lonely pondering his lost years

His beard is long and scraggly and white
His clothes all tattered and torn
His face, all dirty and wrinkled
Now running with crooked rivers
Down past his down-turned mouth

He had so much to look forward to:
Wife, kids, and grandchildren
A career which gave him pride
A career which gave him passion

Following the less-than-followed
Going the hard way through life
Struggling even day-to-day
Time just kept moving on
Not stopping for idle souls

The sun sets, darkening the bush floor
The shadows broken up by just pinpricks of light
A man lies lonely pondering his lost dreams
A man lies lonely pondering his lost years
©2008-2009 ~will-bob
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Author's Comments

Well this one was written in two parts, mostly on the Wednesday, but the start was written on the 16th. Wasn't really inspired by anything other than the first three lines which I seemed to grab randomly.

I kind of feel like it's too much like a draft as well so it might be slightly updated in the next few days.

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raaaaaaaaaaaaawr

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In lieu of the innuendo in the end know my intent though

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wow,that has such amazing detail in such a small space, i can actually see this poor old guy in my head, makes ya wanna run ova n give him a hug and say cheer up old emo guy! lol

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